You imprison me here, my body in chain. Try to take control over me and command my brain.
You can put me to the darkest hole, But you will never break my soul.
In my mind and my dreams I am free. You will never have control over me!
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Something that came to my mind while working on this piece. Since I'm not a big writer and english is not my native language, I hope this is not too weird ^^
Love this picture, it's beautiful and the emotion at first glance is outstanding. However, I should point out some things- -Compared to the rest of the picture, the bird looks like it doesn't fit. I think what I mean is that it kind of looks like the bird was originally inside the building, as the birds and the bars don't bring out eachother enough. -The bird doesn't look as "realistic" as the other things in this picture? It's more 2D than the rest, I guess. -Again, on the bird, it looks almost as if it were from another picture and the outlines weren't edited well enough Now that I've been mean, I can be nice -I think you edited this picture really well. The lighting was so well edited that it doesn't look like these were all seperate pictures. If it were me, I wouldn't have been so precise with the shadows -The poem really emphasizes this photo. I'm a dramatic person that loves poetry, so you can just see how this would affect me lol lD Overall, you captured everything beautifully, my point through all this is to, maybe, choose the pictures included more precisely. Great Job! (200WORDSBUTNOWTHEREARE201XD)
Amazing job!!! I love the concept!! The poem is very nice and isn't wierd at all!! The art is beautiful there is nothing to change at all!! Everything is amazing the picture , the light, the shadows , the details the whole thing rocks!! And no your English is totally fine. The picture reminds me of my thoughts this afternoon on being a free bird, for me life is about being free... A free spirit. This drawing is very original and the impact is amazing!! Every detail is clearly seen, from the tree branches to the shadows on the hand. I love this piece!! You are a great artist!!
-Compared to the rest of the picture, the bird looks like it doesn't fit. I think what I mean is that it kind of looks like the bird was originally inside the building, as the birds and the bars don't bring out eachother enough.
-The bird doesn't look as "realistic" as the other things in this picture? It's more 2D than the rest, I guess.
-Again, on the bird, it looks almost as if it were from another picture and the outlines weren't edited well enough
Now that I've been mean, I can be nice
-I think you edited this picture really well. The lighting was so well edited that it doesn't look like these were all seperate pictures. If it were me, I wouldn't have been so precise with the shadows
-The poem really emphasizes this photo. I'm a dramatic person that loves poetry, so you can just see how this would affect me lol lD
Overall, you captured everything beautifully, my point through all this is to, maybe, choose the pictures included more precisely. Great Job!
(200WORDSBUTNOWTHEREARE201XD)
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